Feedback from Monday's run through:
Lily:
what I achieved: Merit
Strengths: Lily thought my monologue for the White Rabbit was well written and well-spoken. I showed many skills within my piece and used my creative ideas and knowledge and applied to my performance. 
Weaknesses: However, I have many weaknesses that I need to work on. These include; having conviction in what I am saying. I am portraying a character who has a wild imagination and I need to show this through the use of facial expressions, different pace and dynamics in my vocals and body language. I need to challenge myself more by using the entire body to move, thinking more about Meyerhold's techniques and apply them to my performance to emphasise my character. In addition, I need to think about the transitions between my scenes and make them more smooth. I can do this by cutting out some blackouts and changing the ending cues to make it easier to smoothly transition into the next scene. 
How am I going to apply this feedback to my piece and achieve a distinction?
To achieve a distinction, I am going to apply this feedback from both Lily and Elle and improve on my piece. The weaknesses I need to improve on is my movements. I need to move to each place with purpose and use my entire body to apply a technique of Meyerhold into my performance. In addition, I need to use facial expressions and different paces and dynamics in my voice to portray the wild character that I am playing. I am going to do this by working with my scenes and changing the tone and use different paces to show how he creates the different characters in his play.

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